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A Unique Birthday Gift A great idea for any birthday, A Gift of Poetry can be a funny and romantic way to express your innermost feelings.
Whether for a friend, your partner or for your parents, a birthday poem will make the day an unforgettable experience.
(Here's a good example of what can be achieved. Dotty was going to be holding a surprise party and wanted something special for her husband, David. Dotty has kindly given her permission for her poem and story to be published)
So is Mine
What is your name: Dorothy (Dotty) Crowley
What style of poem would you prefer (happy, sad, romantic etc.): happy, funny
So is
Mine
Family and friends ,
can I have your attention please?
Because every now and then in life,
there's opportunity you should
seize.
And that moment is upon us,
because 60 years ago, David had his
birth day,
and I've got some thoughts on my
mind,
yes, there's some heartfelt words
that I need to say:
Firstly, I'd like to begin by
saying "I love you",
I'd like to thank you for the best
years of my life,
I'd like to salute your kindness,
generosity and love,
I'm very proud to be called "your
wife".
Before we were married I was a
divorced single Mom,
and I'd been that way for nigh on
twenty years,
I'd persevered
through life, mostly on my own,
and yes, there were some
heartaches, some tears.
But all that changed when David
came along,
and the clouds went away and the
sun came out,
and as a husband, a father, a
step dad, a father-in-law, a son,
well, he's taught us all what love
is really about.
He's a man of strong conviction,
and no jokes please, he likes to
debate,
actually, sometimes they turn into
lectures,
(I know what to say but always too
late).
The first time David took me away
we went camping,
I'm not the outdoorsy type (so I
knew it was love),
and although the first night we
stayed in the Hotel le Sabre,
the camping was wonderful (with
clear skies above).
He's made up for it since then,
because we've really had our sails
unfurled,
Ireland, England, Spain, France,
Italy, Hawaii and Alaska,
we're starting to explore other
camp sites around the world.
David and I have a number of things
in common,
his birth date is August 15 (and so
is mine),
however, for the record, I am much
younger,
and there's just a hint
of melancholy in the very next line.
His Dad's name was Harold (so was
mine),
Skippy was his and Skipper was my
childhood pet,
and David once took me into the fun
house at Canobie Lake,
in the 6th grade, so it's destiny
that once again, we've met.
David plays tennis but
is obsessed with golf,
although the rules don't apply to
him (only me),
and when he first started he was a
little S-L-O-W,
but now he gets around fairly
speed-i-ly.
But seriously, David, I really love
you,
I've never told you just how
wonderful you are,
but if my love for you were a
distance,
then it would be further than the
furthest star.
And I just wanted to say Happy 60th
Birthday,
but I thought I'd save that until
the very last line,
and now your
hand is holding the hand of the one
you love,
and let me tell you, guess what? So is
mine!
Copyright Allen Jesson :) 2004
Dotty kindly replied: Hello Allen, Thanks for the first draft; it is really outstanding. The only thing in question is the very last portion: "and if your hand was holding the had of the one you love, well, let me tell you, guess what? So was mine!" I would like it to say something like "and now your hand is holding the hand of the one you love, and let me tell you guess what? So is mine!" I don't care for the "if". I've marked a few other places below. (All changed in the 2nd draft. ED) Thanks again, Dotty Crowley We had a close call with delivery but Dotty then said; Dear Allen, Yes, Beth did send me the shipping details and I just now received my package from our mail room! Thank you , thank you, thank you. I am surely relieved. The package and presentation is beautiful and despite the close call, I am extremely pleased. All the best, Dotty Crowley
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