A Unique Anniversary Gift that says "I love you"(Here's a good example of what can be achieved. Waid was going to be celebrating his tenth anniversary and wanted something special for his wife, Katrina. Waid has kindly given his permission for their poem and story to be published)
Never Ending Desire - I love you today, I'll love you forever
Full Name: Dr. Waid McMillion
Never Ending
Desire
Ten years, one decade,
three thousand, 652 days.
After all this time I love you so,
and I love you in so many different
ways.
My love is unconditional,
so unlike the setting sun,
because my heart will shine
forever,
for me, you'll always be the one.
We've endured so much these
past ten years,
but our bonds grow stronger still,
I know I'll always love you,
and Katrina, I know I always will.
You have blessed me with Morgan and
Kya,
and together, we are completely
whole,
with you in my life I feel
complete,
and I love you with all my heart,
my very soul.
You have nothing but my admiration,
especially for your will to suffer
me all these years,
together, we've overcome our
obstacles,
together, we've battled and
conquered our fears.
We married very early,
and no one gave us a chance in
hell,
you were introverted, quite quiet,
and I wasn't (can you tell?).
Morgan quickly followed,
the most beautiful child I'd ever
seen,
and your light shone like a 1000
suns,
I was the proudest father that
there's ever been.
I remember the day being so
magical,
and being young, I didn't quite
relish it fully at the time,
but I do know that my love for you
changed forever,
and that's just one of the reasons
for this rhyme.
Because we went from high school
sweethearts,
from sweethearts to so much more,
me the provider, you the caretaker,
but neither of us truly knew the
score.
Morgan was a reminder of our
responsibility,
and you supported me one hundred
per cent,
a precious love like that simply
can't be bought.
before then, I never knew what
sacrifice really meant.
Kya Rae was born during my 3rd year
of medical school,
I was the delivering physician,
honored to be on hand,
and I remember looking at the
prettiest woman in the world,
but these are words only a
delivering father would understand.
I remember the countless times
coming home from rotations,
and I'd find you and the girls
asleep at night,
and I'd sit and watch you for ages,
being warmed to the core by
you, soft in the gentle light.
And you do work so very hard,
a full time job and a mother to
boot,
some days you're frazzled,
exhausted, dead tired,
but you still manage to look so
cute.
You care for me and the girls like
you haven't done a thing,
constantly thinking you're lucky to
have us in your life,
well, I know the girls have a
brilliant mother,
and I know that I have a very
wonderful wife.
We are who we are because of you,
you're the glue that holds this
ship together,
and ours is a journey that's just
begun,
and it's one that will last
forever.
My graduation day, I've never felt
so proud,
I was proud of the person that I'd
become,
and as I glanced at the crowd I
felt so lucky,
I married a wonderful girl, a
wonderful Mom.
And I feel like I've got
everything,
a beautiful wife, great children
and so much more,
I've got terrific parents, loving
friends, God,
and that's really what these words
are for.
Because we have survived all our
and other's doubts,
and we've made more music than all
the world's ever sung,
and what we've shared has been far
greater,
far greater than anything we lost
by marrying young.
I want you to know that you're my
Queen,
to know simply, you are the best,
and any doubts you have about our
future,
well, let me tell you, you can put
those to rest.
Because you are my center of the
Universe,
my magnetic pole, I am pulled
towards you my love,
I am a father, a provider, a lover,
truly blessed by the heavens above.
My desire for you is never ending,
and I think that's all I want to
say,
my knees buckle, my heart pounds,
every time you flash that smile my
way.
This is my never ending desire,
our life and our love my final
role,
naturally, lasting forever and
ever,
engulfing you mind, body and soul.
Copyright Allen Jesson :) 2003
After the first draft:
"Dear Allen, I love the poem. It was
exactly what I was looking for. I love the fact that you allow us to help in
the editing it makes it feel more special for me to be able to do this. I have
attached what I would like changed. Thank You so much. I can't wait to see the
next Draft. I truly am excited to be doing this for her. Sincerely, Dr. Waid
McMillion
We made some changes (and culled about 5 verses). After the second draft: "Dear Allen, I am
amazed I think it is wonderful. It's exactly what I hoped it would be. You have
shown me something very special and for that I thank You. I am 100% Pleased with
the results of this and so grateful for this gift.
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